http://litofwar.wordpress.com/2008/10/20/the-separation-of-humanity-from-nature/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Tue, 11 Nov 2008 22:00:08 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://litofwar.wordpress.com/2008/10/20/the-separation-of-humanity-from-nature/#comment-131 allenr09 Mon, 20 Oct 2008 02:33:13 +0000 http://litofwar.wordpress.com/?p=222#comment-131 I like that you chose a poem for this response. Your essay is short and easy to read, which I also like. I think you should have examined more of the lines of the poem and in more detail. I don't agree with your last point that humans broke off from nature somewhere along the line. We may feel that we are superior to other animals by our standards, but some sharks have been around for millions of years and have a 6th sense. Thats a lot more advanced than building computers. I like that you chose a poem for this response. Your essay is short and easy to read, which I also like. I think you should have examined more of the lines of the poem and in more detail. I don’t agree with your last point that humans broke off from nature somewhere along the line. We may feel that we are superior to other animals by our standards, but some sharks have been around for millions of years and have a 6th sense. Thats a lot more advanced than building computers.

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